Articles | Volume 20, issue 23
https://doi.org/10.5194/bg-20-4775-2023
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Serpulid microbialitic bioherms from the upper Sarmatian (Middle Miocene) of the central Paratethys Sea (NW Hungary) – witnesses of a microbial sea
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ED: Publish as is (23 Oct 2023) by Cindy De Jonge
AR by Mathias Harzhauser on behalf of the Authors (24 Oct 2023)
The paper deals with new metazoan/microbial build-ups formed by Janua tubes and autochthonous peloidal micrite, from the upper Sarmatian of the Paratethys Sea. The Authors describe these unusual bioconstructions and interpreted them in term of paleoenvironmental evolution of the Paratethys Sea during the late Middle Miocene.
The peculiarity of the described bioherms, their comparison with other microbial/metazoan bioconstructions spanning in time and space and their paleoecological and paleoenvironmental implication make the research novel and suitable for the Biogeosciences journal.
The paper is interesting, well-structured and clearly written, the title reflects the contents of the paper and the abstract provide a complete summary. The main concern is the interpretation of the microbialite component with the only observation at mesoscale and thin sections. In my opinion the paper can benefit of more detailed micromorphological, mineralogical and biogeochemical analyses to prove irrefutably the biotic nature of the micritic sediments and their interpretation as microbial carbonates.
Specific comment and suggestions:
Introduction
The introduction on the paleoecological evolution and bioconstructions of the Central Paratethys Sea is well addressed and introduces the readers to the topic, but the paragraph lacks the aim of the present research, for example:
All these aspects were addressed in the following paragraphs but they were not introduced as aims of the research in the introduction.
Results
In the paragraph “4.1 Bioherm morphology” were described the four stage of growth of the bioherm but this is an interpretation. Here it would be more appropriate to describe the morphological and compositional characteristics at the mesoscale of the bioherms. The interpretation must be moved after the result paragraph.
In general, the microfacies are well described and illustrated but the microbial or organic induced nature of the micrite is based only on morphological observations at mesoscale and thin section observations, so the interpretation as microbialite seems speculative. To confirm their model, the authors should supplement the data with SEM/EDS, Raman spectroscopy, UV-fluorescence or other techniques aimed to put in evidence: 1) details at higher magnification of the micro and nano-structures of the putative microbialite fraction; 2) the mineral composition of the presumed autochthonous micrite; 3) the organic nature of the microbialites.
Discussion
The discussion section is well structured and the comparison between the studied metazoan/microbial bioconstructions and those reported in literature, which spam in time and space, is well addressed. The only doubt is about the support of the discussion with the acquired data, mainly concerning the interpretation of the peloidal and clotted peloidal micrite as microbially mediated. The morphologies seem attributable to microbial activities but more micro- nano-morphological, mineralogical and biogeochemical investigations could prove definitively their origin.
I think that the topic proposed in the paper is interesting and opens to a new discussion on not-usual build-ups, but the interpretation and discussion must be supported by more convincing micro-nanomorphological and biogeochemical data to prove mainly the induced or influenced biomineralization of the putative microbialite fractions.