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Reviews and syntheses: Remotely sensed optical time series for monitoring vegetation productivity
Lammert Kooistra
Katja Berger
Benjamin Brede
Lukas Valentin Graf
Helge Aasen
Jean-Louis Roujean
Miriam Machwitz
Martin Schlerf
Clement Atzberger
Egor Prikaziuk
Dessislava Ganeva
Enrico Tomelleri
Holly Croft
Pablo Reyes Muñoz
Virginia Garcia Millan
Roshanak Darvishzadeh
Gerbrand Koren
Ittai Herrmann
Offer Rozenstein
Santiago Belda
Miina Rautiainen
Stein Rune Karlsen
Cláudio Figueira Silva
Sofia Cerasoli
Jon Pierre
Emine Tanır Kayıkçı
Andrej Halabuk
Esra Tunc Gormus
Frank Fluit
Zhanzhang Cai
Marlena Kycko
Thomas Udelhoven
Jochem Verrelst
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RC1: 'Comment on bg-2023-88', Anonymous Referee #1, 29 Aug 2023
The comment was uploaded in the form of a supplement: https://bg.copernicus.org/preprints/bg-2023-88/bg-2023-88-RC1-supplement.pdf
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AC3: 'Reply on RC1', Katja Berger, 28 Sep 2023
Dear reviewer,
Many thanks for your good suggestions and the time you dedicated to reading our manuscript. We agree with your points and will provide a revised manuscript with a shortened chapter 5 (literature review), improving/reducing the figures. Your advised references are indeed relevant and highly interesting; therefore, we will include them in the respective sections. In addition, we will indicate future missions (SBG, PACE, EMIT) in Figure 3. Regarding your remark about NBP, we will add it to the blue definitions box. Thanks for the good advice! However, Figure 13 is, in our opinion, correct, with GPP - > NPP - > NEP - > NBP as the four main fluxes with increasing time scales but decreasing amounts of stored carbon due to diverse loss processes. Please find also some information in the IPCC report here:https://archive.ipcc.ch/ipccreports/sres/land_use/index.php?idp=24, stating that for instance “Compared to the total fluxes between atmosphere and biosphere, global NBP is comparatively small; NBP for the decade 1989-1998 has been estimated to be 0.7 ± 1.0 Gt C yr -1” With GPP of 120 Gt C yr-1, the NBP is indeed around 0,5%. We will include a better explanation of Figure 13 in the revised manuscript.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/bg-2023-88-AC3
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AC3: 'Reply on RC1', Katja Berger, 28 Sep 2023
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AC1: 'Comment on bg-2023-88', Katja Berger, 08 Sep 2023
Dear Reviewer,
Many thanks for your good suggestions and the time you dedicated to reading our paper. We agree with your points and will provide a revised manuscript with a shortened chapter 5 (literature review), improving/reducing the figures. Your advised references are indeed relevant and highly interesting; therefore, we will include them in the respective sections. In addition, we will indicate future missions (SBG, PACE, EMIT) in Figure 3.
Regarding your remark about NBP, we will add it to the blue definitions box. Thanks for the good advice! However, Figure 13 is, in our opinion, correct, with GPP - > NPP - > NEP - > NBP as the four main fluxes with increasing time scales but decreasing amounts of stored carbon due to diverse loss processes. Please find also some information in the IPCC report here:https://archive.ipcc.ch/ipccreports/sres/land_use/index.php?idp=24, stating that for instance “Compared to the total fluxes between atmosphere and biosphere, global NBP is comparatively small; NBP for the decade 1989-1998 has been estimated to be 0.7 ± 1.0 Gt C yr -1” With GPP of 120 Gt C yr-1, the NBP is indeed around 0,5%. We will include a better explanation of Figure 13 in the revised manuscript.
Please let us know in case you have further questions.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/bg-2023-88-AC1 -
RC2: 'Comment on bg-2023-88', Anonymous Referee #2, 14 Sep 2023
I would like to start by expressing my appreciation for the effort put into this manuscript. I have read it carefully and I have some feedback that I hope will be helpful in improving the manuscript. My primary concern revolves around the absence of a clear research/review question and the overall lack of structure within the manuscript. To my understanding, the primary objective of this manuscript is to conduct a review of recent advancements in methodologies, sensors, and applications related to remote sensing of vegetation productivity. Vegetation productivity is defined in terms of GPP, NEP, NPP, ABG, crop yield, and harvested wood (as outlined in Table 1). However, I have a few comments:
- The manuscript does not adequately clarify its objectives concerning the review of remotely sensed time series (TS) data in relation to vegetation productivity.
If the aim is to review methods and sensors used to "retrieve/estimate" vegetation productivity from TS data, it appears that the manuscript has not achieved this goal. For example, while multiple sections discuss VIs and RTMs as proxies for productivity, my expectation was that the authors would concentrate on reviewing the methodologies to derive the productivity metrics they defined in table 1 using VIs etc.
If the objective is to review time series analyses of vegetation productivity and summarizing the latest "findings" from TS analyses, such as changes in phenology or trends in GPP, it appears that the manuscript has not effectively accomplished this goal. For instance, Section 3.5 discusses tools for time series analyses and preprocessing, yet there are already comprehensive reviews available on these topics as some of them are highlighted in the MS itself. In terms of sensors (Section 2), the manuscript lists several satellites, but to my knowledge, aside from a few exceptions (e.g., MODIS GPP), most of them do not provide productivity metric estimates as defined in this paper. It remains unclear why these sensors are included in the manuscript. Furthermore, VIs and canopy traits derived from these sensors are considered loose proxies for vegetation productivity, and their time series analyses may not necessarily align with time series of productivity metrics.
I am not trying to impose my view on how the review should be structured, all I’m asking for is more clear objectives.
- The manuscript is unnecessarily lengthy and mostly provides general information without delving deeply into each subject. The introduction (Section 1) is overly general, and much of the information is repeated later in the text. I would recommend revising it to clearly outline the main objectives and rationale for the need for a new review. Section 1.1 requires some refinement, particularly regarding photosynthesis, a key component of productivity. Notably, the authors seem to have overlooked important literature, including reviews, on this topic (e.g., Ryu et al., 2019). Section 1.2 is disorganized, with information being repeated in other sections. In Section 1.3, it's essential to emphasize that we estimate productivity using remote sensing data rather than measuring it directly. Additionally, the authors have listed VIs and some other variables as productivity metrics, which does not align with my expectation based on Table 1. Section 2.4 lists platforms that are merely web applications facilitating data download and processing from other remote sensing platforms. These platforms serve different purposes, and it's unclear why they are presented here. Overall, Section 2 offers general information on sensors and platforms and needs revision to align more consistently with the productivity metrics.
- Please refer to my previous comments on VIs and traits in Sections 3.1.1 and 3.1.2.
- Sections 3.1.3 to 4.2 present various time series studies, toolboxes, and variables ranging from VIs to phenology and GPP. The main objectives of these sections are unclear and appear to require revision for clarity and focus (please refer to point #1).
- Section 5.1 is one of the strongest parts of MS. It interesting to know that many studies refer to VIs as productivity (Figure 9). It would be nice to link this section to GPP, AGB as authors defined them as productivity.
- The application section is very general. I think it needs revision to make it more focused on the objectives of the manuscript.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/bg-2023-88-RC2 -
AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Katja Berger, 27 Sep 2023
Dear reviewer,
We would like to thank you for your critical feedback on our paper. We appreciate your time and effort, and we are committed to addressing your concerns.
We agree that the manuscript is lengthy and that more detail is needed in some parts. Mainly, this concerns the introduction, which should more clearly outline the need for a new review and formulate a clear research question.
We reformulated our objective, aligned with the advice of the reviewer, into the following research question: “What are the state-of-the-art methods for estimating vegetation productivity using remotely sensed time series data, and what are the key gaps, challenges and opportunities for further improvement?”
This question will be included in the revised manuscript and clearly positioned in the introduction section as soon as the revision is elaborated. As indicated by the reviewer , in Section 3, we will provide a clear overview of the methodologies used to derive the productivity metrics that we reviewed for this manuscript.
Our main focus lies on the precise remote sensing-based estimation of productivity with consideration of the trend toward the increasing availability of higher spatial resolution EO data. Global change is resulting in a landscape, which is more fragmented, scattered and characterized by small patterns. One example is the upcoming trend of agroforestry to make agriculture more resilient. As a consequence, the analysis of productivity needs to integrate high spatial resolution remote sensing data and we preferred to focus more on the spatial scale than on the minimum number of time steps. One of the main keywords of our systematic literature review was "time series." We did not initially define a minimum number of consecutive observations for inclusion in the review. Unlike other papers, which define a time series as consisting of a minimum of several observations, we included studies with a minimum of two images without an upper limit. This allowed us to include studies that have traditionally been labeled under the topic of change detection analysis.
We chose to do this for two reasons. First, we believe that the minimum number of observations in a time series is arbitrary, and we wanted to take a more comprehensive approach to examining the aspect of time. Second, the number of studies using long time series consisting of tens to hundreds of high-resolution (10-30 m pixel size) images is relatively small. If we had only looked at long time series, we would have excluded many studies that observe productivity from Landsat and Sentinel-2 satellites.
The following figures (see attached document) show the number of published papers per number of observations in a time series. Two observations emerge from these figures: i) A relatively large number (about 37) of studies mention the term time series but are based on only 2 images; ii) at a larger number of observations (n) there is a normal distribution going up to 1000 observations with a slowly decreasing number of papers (p) with increasing n.
Based on the suggestions of the reviewer, we have analyzed this further, and we will add this aspect (including the figure) to the description in section 5.1.
Regarding your point: “...while multiple sections discuss VIs and RTMs as proxies for productivity, my expectation was that the authors would concentrate on reviewing the methodologies to derive the productivity metrics they defined in table 1 using VIs etc…”
Please note that VIs or RTMs are needed to derive information about productivity metrics as listed in the blue box. It is therefore crucial to concentrate on these methods, which are not always proxies. VIs have been used often as proxies, but RTMs are not direct proxies; they provide traits that can act as proxies or can be further used in process models to derive productivity metrics (like VIs).
Please note that Section 1 is the introduction section. In the introduction section, we want to give an overview of the different concepts, sensors, and methods, which are repeated but explained more in detail in the following sections, as also referred to. However, since it appears to you that we repeat the same information, we will make sure to delete redundant sentences.
Specifically, we will prioritize refining Section 1.1 to ensure that it provides a comprehensive and accurate overview of photosynthesis, and we will review the literature to add any relevant references that we may have overlooked.
We will also strongly revise Section 1.2 to ensure that it is organized and that information is not repeated in other sections. In Section 1.3, we will emphasize that we estimate productivity using remote sensing data rather than measuring it directly. We will also clarify the relationship between VIs and other variables and productivity metrics.
Furthermore, we will revise Section 2.4 to ensure that it is more focused on productivity metrics.
Sections 3.1.3 to 4.2: We will revise these sections to clarify and state their main objectives and focus them more directly on the productivity metrics that we are discussing. We will also ensure that these sections are consistent with the overall objectives of the manuscript.
Section 5.1: We will link this section to GPP and AGB more explicitly, as we have defined these as productivity metrics. We will also discuss the relationship between VIs and GPP/AGB in more detail.
We will also revise the application section as best as possible to make it more focused.
We would like to thank the reviewer again for their thoughtful and constructive feedback. We are particularly grateful for your insights into the structure and organization of the manuscript, as well as your suggestions for how to improve the clarity and focus of our writing. We are committed to addressing your concerns to the best of our ability. Therefore, we will carefully consider all your comments and make appropriate revisions to the manuscript. We are confident that we can produce a revised manuscript that meets the reviewer's expectations and makes a significant contribution to the field.