Articles | Volume 23, issue 12
https://doi.org/10.5194/bg-23-4057-2026
© Author(s) 2026. This work is distributed under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.
DOM consumption and demethylation of MeHg as potential drivers of low MeHg in Mediterranean Sea sponges and benthic fish: a modeling perspective
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- Final revised paper (published on 22 Jun 2026)
- Preprint (discussion started on 12 Nov 2025)
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-5377', Anonymous Referee #1, 15 Dec 2025
- AC2: 'Reply on RC1', David Amptmeijer, 19 Feb 2026
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-5377', Anonymous Referee #2, 29 Dec 2025
- AC1: 'Reply on RC2', David Amptmeijer, 19 Feb 2026
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ED: Publish subject to minor revisions (review by editor) (25 Feb 2026) by Xun Wang
AR by David Amptmeijer on behalf of the Authors (21 Mar 2026)
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ED: Publish as is (23 Mar 2026) by Xun Wang
ED: Publish as is (23 Mar 2026) by David McLagan (Co-editor-in-chief)
AR by David Amptmeijer on behalf of the Authors (30 Apr 2026)
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This study constructed a model to trace the bioaccumulation of MeHg within the Mediterranean Sea food web in the Bay of Villefranche. The model initially enabled assessing the levels of iHg and MeHg accumulating in LMA sponges. The model was also used to assess the differences in MeHg bioaccumulation in fish in a setup with and without sponges to see if sponges influence the MeHg bioaccumulation in fish. Although an advanced model was developed and the design of scenarios was ingenious in this study, the article reads rather obscure. Many paragraphs are suggested to be refined, and the logicality should be simultaneously increased. Major revision is needed and some comments are shown as follows.
(1) Line 85: The sentence “This is proposed in (Amptmeijer et al., 2025b), which is a……” is confused. Please rewrite the sentence.
(2) Section 2.1: A map is needed for the model domain in the main text.
(3) For the subtitles of sections 2.1, 2.2, 2.3, and 2.3.2, dashes are better than semicolons. And capitalize the first letter of “semi-labile” in Section 2.6.
(4) Section 3.4: In my opinion, the observations of Hg and MeHg in the study domain are too few to support the model evaluation. I suggest more observations particularly for various environments and functional groups.
(5) All the figures should be improved due to their rough presentation.
(6) Section 4.2: What’s the underlying mechanisms for low MeHg due to DOM consumption in HMA sponges? I only see the results of model scenarios. However, the mechanistic inference is more meaningful.
(7) For model studies, uncertainty analysis is necessary to explain the credibility of the model results. I recommend the supplement of uncertainty analysis.