Articles | Volume 23, issue 13
https://doi.org/10.5194/bg-23-4821-2026
© Author(s) 2026. This work is distributed under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.
Testing the precipitation-driven diffusion limitation hypothesis for declining methane uptake in forest soils
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- Final revised paper (published on 13 Jul 2026)
- Preprint (discussion started on 02 Apr 2026)
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-1723', Jiaxu Han, 03 May 2026
- AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Victor Edmonds, 05 May 2026
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-1723', Anonymous Referee #2, 04 Jun 2026
- AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Victor Edmonds, 07 Jun 2026
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ED: Submit a revised manuscript (11 Jun 2026) by Lishan Ran
AR by Victor Edmonds on behalf of the Authors (12 Jun 2026)
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ED: Referee Nomination & Report Request started (23 Jun 2026) by Lishan Ran
RR by Jiaxu Han (25 Jun 2026)
RR by Anonymous Referee #3 (02 Jul 2026)
ED: Publish as is (02 Jul 2026) by Lishan Ran
AR by Victor Edmonds on behalf of the Authors (02 Jul 2026)
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The manuscript provides a highly rigorous and analytically sound evaluation of the diffusion limitation hypothesis using long-term data from the BES and HBR networks. The statistical methodologies are robust, and the paper is logically structured. However, a few terminological clarifications, tonal adjustments regarding inferred biological mechanisms, and graphical enhancements would further elevate the manuscript. More importantly, two overarching issues should be addressed to strengthen the scientific rigor of the study. First, the conceptual framing of the “diffusion limitation hypothesis” requires clearer specification, particularly in distinguishing precipitation-driven (climatic) diffusion from structurally mediated diffusion processes discussed later in the manuscript. Second, several key interpretations—especially those related to biological mechanisms and long-term drivers—are based on indirect inference from observational data and would benefit from more cautious wording and clearer acknowledgment of their limitations.
Here are my specific comments:
1. In the abstract and introduction, make sure it is clearly stated that the manuscript is testing the "precipitation-driven (climatic) diffusion limitation hypothesis." Because they also discusses "structural diffusion limitation" caused by invasive earthworms, so two mechanisms should be clearly distinguished to avoid confusion.
2. The study's in-situ volumetric water content (VWC) data from 2011-2020 spans after the 2002 structural breakpoint at BES. This should be mentioned in the abstract to avoid over-interpretation of the VWC results in the context of pre-decline conditions.
3. Line73: When first introducing the VWC dataset (2011-2020) in the Methods section, it would be helpful to explicitly mention upfront that this timeframe occurs after the established 2002 BES breakpoint, setting the appropriate context for the mechanistic test presented later in the paper.
4. Line246 Regarding the WS1 calcium amendment, stating that the null result is "positive evidence for biological control" is too strong. While the biochemical logic (liming increases pH/nitrification, thus inhibiting acidophilic methanotrophs) is sound, without direct microbial abundance data (e.g., pomA gene surveys), this remains speculative. Please soften the phrasing to "a highly plausible hypothesis consistent with existing biochemical pathways."
5. Line314 The author rightly and transparently acknowledges that the 2011 HBR breakpoint leaves only 4 data points in the post-break regime (and only 2 if truncated). Please ensure that this is consistently referred to as a "putative shift" throughout the entire manuscript—including adjusting the wording in the abstract (around Line 13)—to maintain a rigorous statistical tone.
6. Fig.5: To help readers visually align the atmospheric wet deposition trends with the sink collapses, please add vertical dashed lines to both panels in Figure 5 indicating the respective structural breakpoints (2002 for BES; 2011 for HBR).
7. Line445 The "return-to-baseline" hypothesis—suggesting that late-20th-century acid deposition artificially stimulated methane uptake, and the current decline is actually a normalization—is a brilliant, paradigm-shifting insight. Because it fundamentally reframes the ecological narrative, consider briefly mentioning this alternative hypothesis in the Conclusions (Section 5).