Articles | Volume 23, issue 11
https://doi.org/10.5194/bg-23-3887-2026
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Denitrification as the dominant process in nitrous oxide production in the water column of two eutrophic reservoirs
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ED: Publish as is (24 Mar 2026) by Wei Wen Wong
AR by Elizabeth Leon-Palmero on behalf of the Authors (06 Apr 2026)
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In this manuscript, the authors report nitrous oxide production pathways in two eutrophic reservoirs using 15N tracer incubations, natural-abundance isotopes, and functional gene quantification. The methodologies are well-established and proven effective in clarifying nitrous oxide production in aquatic systems; the datasets add valuable observations to the community; and the analyses generally support the claim that denitrification dominates water‑column nitrous oxide production. The manuscript is suitable for target journal when properly revised. Note: line numbers and pages from authors’ PDF file.
My main concern is in the title. The authors argue that denitrification could be the predominant process regulating nitrous oxide production, and in the Discussion section, the authors present evidence about higher nirS abundance and isotopic patterns associated with denitrification. However this argument may be weakened by the fact that, denitrification was generally absent at the oxygenated surface water (figs. 2 & 3), and the N2O consumption potential inferred from natural abundance isotopic data. The authors acknowledged that nosZ was quantified only at the deepest depths (n=4) and therefore cannot constrain N2O reduction within the entire reservoir (line 270–275; p.12 figure caption). I suggest the authors reframe the argument/statement to better characterize the novelty of their work.
Some minor comments below:
Line 31 – 33: These global estimates of increased N2O emissions from inland waters are often with large uncertainties. Better to state as “mean ± uncertainty”
Line 35 – 37: There are increasing number of literatures about GHG emission from reservoirs (doi: 10.5194/bg-11-5245-2014; 10.1016/j.watres.2025.123420; 10.3390/su132111621 )
Line 52 – 54: Should clarify about low but not zero oxygen promoting partial denitrification and thus net N2O production.
Line 103: Filtrate passing through 0.7 μm GF/F filter may not be suitable to characterize DOC; 0.45μm filter is recommended.
Line 110 – 120: Should mention the pore size of filter collecting molecular samples. Because genetic materials were collected from water pre-filtered through 3 μm, there may be bias toward underestimating particle‑attached nitrifiers or denitrifiers (as stated line 370 – 371).
Line 122: It is better to specify the criteria for selecting the three depths in the main text. And specify when the N2O concentration or isotope samples were measured at which facility. Preservation using mercuric chloride is generally not recommended for sample storage longer than 1 year.
Line 124: What was the volume of air headspace during oxic incubation?
Line 186: It seems the incubation timepoints for nitrification were different from those of N2O production; which two time points were analyzed for 15N-nitrate?
Line 152: The equation (1) by Santoro et al. will overestimate the N2O production from 46N2O signal. The equation proposed by Ji et al., 2018 GBC (doi: 10.1029/2018GB005887) is recommended.
Line 183 – 190: This section 2.8 about calculating N2O yields using two equations, (4) & (5); which one is used to represent data described in line 240 & 246?
Line 191 – 202: Authors should clarify the consistent amount of N injected into mass spectrometry to determine natural abundance. This is important because the concentrations of N species varied with depth. If varying amounts of N were injected, even for the same water sample, mass spectrometry will yield varying isotopic values.
Line 212: Apparently high DO at the surface (> 400 micromolar, ~2-fold saturation) suggests a very strong oxygen source that can only be supported by blooming algal activity. This was not evident from the chl-a concentration profiles (10 – 20 microgram per liter);
Line 318–323: The main text should clarify “sample #12 excluded as specified in the caption of Fig. 6f”
(as stated in caption L325–333).
Line 335 & 466: I am not sure about the statement “remove significant amount of N”. There could be possibility about the loss of nitrate due to algal assimilation, and the biomass being exported to the sediment. In addition, statements about reservoir‑level DIN loss described in Section 4.4 and the supplementary lack uncertainty estimates and assumptions (depth weighting, temporal representativeness, varying hydraulic retention time, etc). Please add a short paragraph enumerating assumptions and explain the possible caveats. Readers may realize that these DIN loss potential could be specific to the sampling period (Jul–Sep), not necessarily annual rates (L465–474 & Table 2).
Line 362 – 365: Authors should clarify the inconsistencies about anoxic depths with measurable amoA gene abundance (fig 3b), or ammonium oxidation rates (fig 2a).
Line 374 – 375: Where are the data for ammonia oxidation/nitrification, that can infer comammox?
Line 444: Are the authors suggesting denitrification potential in anoxic water column or the sediment? Please clarify.
Line 452 – 465: It is better to address the exact profiles shown in figures 2 & 3 when discussing oxycline turnover times and hypolimnetic storage, to help readers understand the statements.