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https://doi.org/10.5194/bg-22-6369-2025
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Hot spots, hot moments, and spatiotemporal drivers of soil CO2 flux in temperate peatlands using UAV remote sensing
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RC1: 'Comment on "Hot spots, hot moments, and spatiotemporal drivers of soil CO2 flux in temperate peatlands using UAV remote sensing"', Anonymous Referee #1, 27 Jun 2025
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AR by Yanfei Li on behalf of the Authors (03 Oct 2025)
The work presented in this manuscript is an impressive culmination of data informing models of the spatiotemporal variations in CO2 flux in temperate peatlands. While the study is rich in data with a compelling model, the current state of the manuscript does not acknowledge two of the most well documented sources of carbon respiration in peatlands. Further, I question the use of UAS TIR imagery to effectively determine soil temperature in a peatland that is so richly covered in vegetation. These concerns are reflected in my two main comments below:
Main Comment 1: I am very happy to see the use of UAS thermal infrared imagery in this study. However, the details into how this method effectively captures the soil temperature of the peatland are not described. Flight conditions of the UAS were not described in the methods (clear, cloudy, after-rain, etc.) which could significantly impact the data. The TIR imagery would also need a thermal emissivity value to be calibrated and ensure accurate temperatures of the surface of the peatlands. This leads me to my issue with the vegetation cover of the peatlands interfering with the soil temperatures. Vegetation cover would have significantly higher thermal emissivity values compared to soils along the peat surface. In the article cited below, Harvey et al. (2019) describes a calibration for the thermal emissivity of water. I believe you should do something similar for vegetation versus soil along the surface of the peatland at the very least. If you can upscale this further by vegetation type, which has already been mapped in your 2024 publication, this would yield even more novel results for your study. Another route with this is offered by calibration in TIR image processing software, where you can apply a static thermal emissivity value based on other published values. This could further improve the model by breaking up the peatland into subsections and again ensuring the accuracy of your temperature values.
Harvey, M. C., Hare, D. K., Hackman, A., Davenport, G., Haynes, A. B., Helton, A., ... & Briggs, M. A. (2019). Evaluation of stream and wetland restoration using UAS-based thermal infrared mapping. Water, 11(8), 1568.
Main Comment 2: This manuscript in its current form does not describe the importance of hydrology or atmospheric pressure on carbon respiration in peatlands. Depths of the water table are well documented in numerous articles to impact carbon respiration, with drier climates and lower water tables leading to enhanced carbon production. This deserves its own paragraph in the introduction and needs to be discussed in the methods in the background of the site. No details are provided about the hydrologic setting of the peatland study site and the difference between minerogenous groundwater contributions versus ombrogenous precipitation contributions are not clarified. The peatland needs to be described in some way (as either a bog, fen, heath, etc.) to understand the expected flows within the peat matrix that change how CO2 is released and generated. I would also point to Figure 2 as the CO2 respiration modeled parallels the rise in the water table of the peatland mid-year, which would be expected in these environments. The role of atmospheric pressure also needs to be addressed by the authors in the manuscript in the introduction and discussion sections. I would like to highlight the carbon respiration occurring in Figure 3 that could be attributed to shifts in atmospheric pressure prior to precipitation. The model appears to fail to quantify the change in atmospheric pressure transitioning from the winter to the spring in the northern hemisphere. This period is also well documented to release carbon rapidly in peatlands due to the thaw occurring and seasonal change in pressure locally. Pressure would be a great variable to incorporate with this model. I believe your correlation with temperature would be secondary to this new variable, if included.
For these reasons, I recommend this manuscript to be reconsidered after major revisions. Additional minor grammatical and queries are provided in the attached “mark-up” version of the manuscript.