Articles | Volume 23, issue 13
https://doi.org/10.5194/bg-23-4759-2026
© Author(s) 2026. This work is distributed under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.
Biosignatures of microbial mats in Pleistocene coral reef cores from IODP Expedition 389 (Hawaiian Drowned Reefs)
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- Final revised paper (published on 09 Jul 2026)
- Preprint (discussion started on 09 Apr 2026)
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Status: closed
Comment types: AC – author | RC – referee | CC – community | EC – editor | CEC – chief editor
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-1564', Nora Noffke, 30 Apr 2026
- AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Hildegard Westphal, 12 Jun 2026
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-1564', Joachim Reitner, 27 May 2026
- AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Hildegard Westphal, 12 Jun 2026
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AR – Author's response | RR – Referee report | ED – Editor decision | EF – Editorial file upload
ED: Submit a revised manuscript (12 Jun 2026) by Mark Lever
AR by Hildegard Westphal on behalf of the Authors (13 Jun 2026)
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ED: Publish subject to technical corrections (15 Jun 2026) by Mark Lever
AR by Hildegard Westphal on behalf of the Authors (23 Jun 2026)
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The manuscript describes microbial mats dominated by photoautotrophic microbes in modern Hawaiian reef systems. The microbial mats develop in a carbonate system. Such systems are commonly not known to preserve microbial textures such as filaments, EPS, and others. The reason is a quick recrystallization of the carbonate. However, this material presented by Westphal et al. shows a multitude of microscopic textures that allows reconstructing of the ancient microbial community and its interaction with the past environmental conditions. The manuscript offers a highly detailed description of these features. The discussion is based on many references relevant. Overall, the study is convincing and sheds light on microbial mat composition in a carbonate system. However, the text is a bit difficult to read, and some minor revisions should be considered. The Study Are section includes already some results that should be moved into the results section. There are also so many illustrations that it is difficult to navigate the text. I suggest trying to reduce the ilustations and descriptions to some major features that are typical for the individual layers (if possible). Pu your best foot forward and chose the best examples. Also, please note that figures and panels should be discussed in the text in their order, e.g. Fig. x A shows...; Fig. X B is a ... etc. This allows the reader to follow along. I made a few suggestions in the attached PDF.