|Review of: Assessment of negative and positive CO2 emissions on global warming metrics using a large ensemble Earth system model simulations|
Vakilifard et al.
The revised version of the paper is greatly improved from the original version and most of my critiques have been satisfactorily addressed. There are a few remaining issues that need to be addressed before publication but these can be addressed with more careful explanations and wording of the paper. Once these issues are addressed I believe that the paper will be ready for publication.
(1) While improved from the original version of the paper the use of ZEC is still not quite correct. ZEC is 'Zero Emission Commitment', however in your experiments emissions of non-CO2 greenhouse gases and aerosols continue for the period where ZEC is assessed. To avoid confusions and apples to oranges comparisons I recommend defining an 'effective Zero Emissions Commitment' eZEC analogous to eTRCE used in the paper. By clearly defining such a metric future research and reviews will not so easily get tripped up by inconsistent definitions of ZEC.
(2) Organization of the paper is a bit weird. Results basically begin at line 200, part-way through the Methods section.
Abstract: There is not enough context in the abstract to clearly understand what Lines 41 to 42 and 45 to 46 mean. I recommend re-writing the abstract to either add context or remove these sentences.
Line 53: Add a citation to the text of the Paris Agreement.
Line 87: Add a comma after 'biosphere'
Line 100: 86 is not really a 'large' ensemble. Similar studies have used 250 or 1000 model variants (e.g. Steinacher & Joos 2016, MacDougall et al. 2017). Maybe just say 'an ensemble'
Line 101: You should add a sentence to acknowledge the very high uncertainty in land-use reconstructions prior to about 1800 CE. Although the 850 CE start date was used by Eby et al. 2013 and other models intercomparison and studies, it is now well known that the land-use reconstructions used for forcing those experiments was based a very poor population estimate data-sets and Eurocentric conceptualizations of land-use. See Koch et al 2019, for a review of the problems in the Americas (the reconstruction used by Eby et al is designated P08 in Koch et al 2019).
Line 103: Add 'climate' after pre-industrial
Line 181: How did you account for the transition from historical RCP datasets ending in 2005 to SSP 2.6 beginning in 2015? Are there any discontinuities in the forcing data-sets?
Figure 1: Add CE after year for clarity. Model years and years BP are also commonly used in ESM studies.
Figure 2: Gray lines with a mean value in black or another colour on-top would be clearer than the rainbow shown.
Line 254 and 255: You are conflating the natural world and your model here. In your model the ocean is the only major energy sink, while it is in the natural world that the ocean takes up ~90\% of heat.
Line 273: Also cite Koven et al. 2022
Figure 7: Be clear that these are cumulative not instantaneous fractions.
Line 425: Cite MacDougall et al. 2017 here, which had a similar result for climate sensitivity.
Line 476: Reword for clarity. When a nation-state no longer wants to abide by a treaty they 'leave' it. Thus the wording here is very confusing. Revise to specifically mention temperature targets.
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